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withdiamonds at 02:38pm on 13/06/2009
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Holy crap. I have one scene left that really needs work, a sex scene, naturallement, that I've been told by several people needs more emotion, more feelings. Gah. They are so right.
But other than that, I think all typos have been caught, homophones fixed, word orders tweaked, and it's as good as it's gonna get.
I keep telling Larry I'll emerge soon and be functional, but he and Neville are napping, so it's fine. Although he thinks then I'm done with writing and little does he know I have three more challenges I've signed up for, plus the usual free-floating ideas in my head.
At least the rain stopped. After a chilly, rainy week in NYC - which was fine, because hi, NYC, as long as I'm there who cares about the weather, plus weather is something I rarely concern myself with, due to its being out of my hands - sunshine is good to see.
Okay, it's time to find lunch. Food = emotion, right?
This mood icon makes me sad and smiley at the same time.
But other than that, I think all typos have been caught, homophones fixed, word orders tweaked, and it's as good as it's gonna get.
I keep telling Larry I'll emerge soon and be functional, but he and Neville are napping, so it's fine. Although he thinks then I'm done with writing and little does he know I have three more challenges I've signed up for, plus the usual free-floating ideas in my head.
At least the rain stopped. After a chilly, rainy week in NYC - which was fine, because hi, NYC, as long as I'm there who cares about the weather, plus weather is something I rarely concern myself with, due to its being out of my hands - sunshine is good to see.
Okay, it's time to find lunch. Food = emotion, right?
This mood icon makes me sad and smiley at the same time.
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